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Why, why why?” I said to my self panting, running from the hunters who chased me .If you don’t know what hunters are, they are a mixed combiantion of human and dog/wolf DNA. Come on feet, move I thought to myself as I jumped over fallen trees, branches, and bushes. My feet torned up from being bare, running on top of roots sticking up from the ground and what not. I slid to a total stop when I reached a dead end “No!” I yelled half-crazed spinning around hearing the hunters gaining a speed of invicibleness to capture me or much worse in me. My plant-like eyes were wide in desesperation, my night hair plastered to my forehead with sweat that I managed to burn from running. “What ya gonna do now girly?”One of the hunters said after they caught up to were I was. I clenched my teeth before smiling, a huge smirk in my face swallowed their idiocy. Falling backwards my black angel-like wings spreaded out of the two slits in my back when they gained tehit total openess, I flew into the sky before I somehow started to fall ,I screamed as I woke up. After that dream I don’t think I could have fallen asleep so I was now fully awake. I shivered and realized that sweat covered me and the window in my room was open. I sighed and got up, I walked to my bedroom window and shuted close before grabbing my clothes I wore and got changed. After I got changed, I brushed my hair and tide it in a pony tail, held by a blue rubber band. “Time to get everyone up “I said before walking to Bennet's room. My name is Acaia, but mostly everyone I know, calls me Acia or Aci. I opened the door to Bennet's room and there he was, on the ground, sleeping blankets pulled off the bed wrapped around his leg and foot, face in the wooden floor.”Bennet dude get up” I yelled pulling the blanket off of him, “I don’t wanna get up aci, five more min.. “Bennet whined but got up anyway “get dressed, then come down for breakfast “I said standing in his door way before closing it and walking to Lolani and Danika’s room, my babies, well they weren’t my biological babies, I just call them that, because I raised them since they were babies. I smiled as I peaked my head into the room of the two and said “Lolani, danika you awake?” I didn’t hear anything so that must have meant they weren’t awake. So I went into their room to wake them up but little did I know they were already awake “guys time to get. AHHH!” I screamed getting tackled by both of them “We're awake Acia!”They both said laughing as I sat up, “you know guys if you were awake in the first place then you should have told me so that I could of made breakfast faster “I said pouting with a smile. “What! Well then we shall help you get everyone else up!”They both said one again in union. “All right” you guys don’t know how much I love you I thought to myself before they both hugged me and said “we know how much you love us and we love you just the same “I smiled now the thing is Lolani and Danika are twins blood related twins and they both can read minds and talk to each other telepathically along with feel each others pain its weird how they do it, but it also scares me.”I need to go and wake the rest of the group up can you help me?”I asked the two and they both nodded before running out of there room to the opposite side of each other I shook my head with a smile on my face and walked downstairs to the kitchen so I could make breakfast for everyone. That’s when I heard someone yell, “hI acia!” I looked up and saw alk hanging from the wooden rafters of the roof. My eyes grew and I yelled “Alk get down what did I tell you about hangi